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31: Bastien (L’Enfant Terrible des Lettres)

  • Writer: Leo Driskill
    Leo Driskill
  • Apr 14
  • 33 min read

I just wanted to get away, so I took off for Paris, booking a last minute room in a small, creaky little hotel. I'd been to Paris a few times for work, but never really got to explore the city. Now, with a whole week to myself, I could wander and get lost in this beautiful place.


I've been walking the Jardin du Luxembourg, taking in the view as the springtime sun began to set, when the clouds roll in. Typical. I quicken my pace, heading north, but soon realize I have no clue where I'm going. The path I take winds through trees and past statues, and I can't even see the entrance I'd come in from. As I walk, the rain starts to patter down, and I realize I'm going to get soaked.


The rain picks up, and I look around for shelter. But then, finally, I spot the exit. Or, an exit, anyway. As the clouds open and the rain begins to pour, I find myself jogging past the Odéon Theatre and on down Rue Casimir Delavigne, dodging likewise unprepared tourists and Parisiens alike, all of us caught without umbrellas. There, to my right, is a seemingly empty bookstore just as the real deluge sets in.


I enter the shop, the door opening before me with a gust of wind spattering rain across the first few feet of hardwood within the store. The clerk looks up from the counter, appearing mildly exasperated. At first glance, the young man looks annoyed.


"Bonsoir,” he says half-heartedly, with a glance to a clock on the wall that reads 8:45. “Vous tombez bien, il reste exactement quinze minutes avant la fermeture."


The clerk looks at me again as I run my hand through my hair, pushing the wet mop out of my eyes. The clerk is young, maybe 25, with curly hair and distinctly French features – I don’t even quite know what this means, but staring into his face for a moment, it just feels right. I’ll be damned if this kid isn’t quintessentially French. Large wire-frame glasses sit just so on the bridge of his nose. He appears to be taking me in just as I am him.


"Mais j’imagine que c’est toujours mieux que la tempête, hein?" he asks, his eyes lingering a moment longer on me. I then see it: a smirk form upon his lips. "Prenez votre temps… enfin, dans la limite du raisonnable."


Snap out of it, man. This dude just said a bunch of shit to you that you have no idea what it means.


“Ah… bonsoir,” I say, shaking my head and glancing down, breaking eye contact. “Merci beaucoup."


I pause for a moment.


"Désolé… uh, je ne parle pas bien français, uh, vous parlez anglais, par hasard?" I ask.


The clerk, watching me with amusement, leans forward against the counter, his smirk only growing.  


"Dommage… j’aurais bien aimé vous entendre massacrer notre belle langue encore un peu."


I smile at the man politely, without the faintest clue what he said to me. The clerk lets the moment linger before speaking to me in his thick Parisien accent, "Of course. What are you looking for?"


I smile and approach the desk where the clerk stands. “I only meant to escape the rain while I get my bearings. I got a little lost,” I say as I pull up the name of my hotel. “Do you happen to know how to get to the… Cosmotel from here? It’s on Boulevard De Strasbourg?”


The clerk thought for a moment.


“Eh… you can take the Metro,” he says softly. “The 4 should get you there. Maybe 15 minutes for you. Or you can take a cab.”


“Thank you – uh, merci,” I say, noting the 4 line to myself. “That’s very kind.”


"You know, with this storm raging outside, it's hardly the night for wandering Parisian streets alone,” the clerk said, standing up straight. “Perhaps I could close up and accompany you to ensure you find your hotel safely. After all, it's easy to get lost in this weather, and I'd hate for anything to happen to you."


His gaze lingers on me for a moment before he finally says, “Allez, tant pis… Why don’t we stay here a little bit and wait for the storm to clear?” He picks up a ballpoint pen like a fidget object and delicately taps it on the counter, waiting for my reply.


“Uh, yeah – yeah, that works,” I stammer out.


“Au fait, moi c’est Bastien,” he says with a cheeky smile.


I chuckle. “I understood that,” I say, wagging my finger. “Moi c’est Leo.”


Bastien smiles at me. “Leo, Leo…” he begins. “Is that short for Leonardo? Leon?”


He continues smiling before chuckling to himself, “Leonidas?”


I chuckle along with him. “No, no. Just Leo.”


I extend my hand for a handshake. “Nice to meet you.”


Bastien stares at my hand, confused, and with his face still angled at my hand, his eyes glance up to mine. He lightly grasps my hand and shakes it, now beginning to smile. As he removes his hand from mine, he gives me a goofy American salute.


“Nice to meet you too, American Leo.”


I laugh, “Sorry about my poor French.”


“Don’t be hard on yourself,” he smiles, gently patting my arm. “At least you asked me – in French – if I speak English. Most Americans – especially in Paris – speak like they own the whole planet.”


“You’re doing just fine,” he finished, giving my arm one final pat, but this time grasping my bicep upon contact. 


Uff… you have strong arms,” he says with a hint of surprise.


I laugh it off, but can't shake the thought that he's giving me a bit of a once-over, this French stranger. Focus, Leo. He knows I'm American, that I'm a tourist lost in the city. Anything beyond that is my imagination running wild.


He flicks off the lights, plunging the store into a dim atmosphere, then slinks away from the counter to pull down the shade on the door, locking it as he turns back to me. "May I offer you a tour while we wait for the rain to stop?"


"Yes, please," I say. Maybe it's not in my head after all.


Bastien leads the way, walking up the small stairwell to the second floor of the bookstore. Walking beside him, I glance down at his ass as he takes the steps. His black pants are loose and flowy, but his ass is perfectly visible in them nonetheless. I wonder if he's wearing anything underneath.


"So, you're from Paris?" I ask him as we walk.


"Born and raised," he replies. "Have you been to Paris before?"


I nod. "A few times, for work. But I've never really gotten to explore the city."


"Well, I'm glad you're here now," Bastien says, giving me a sidelong glance. "It's always more fun to show a newcomer around."


The feeling of being checked out intensifies as we wander through the bookstore. Bastien shows me the rare books, old editions, and unique finds. He speaks with passion about the literature, and I can't help but be drawn in by his enthusiasm. Each time he shares a work with me, his eye contact lingers.


As we move through the aisles, our shoulders occasionally brush against each other. Every time it happens, my heart skips a beat. Is he doing that on purpose?


At one point, we stop to look at a particularly old book, with a title I don't recognize. Bastien leans in close, pointing out the intricate details of the binding. I can feel his breath on my skin, and I suppress a shiver. This feels like flirting. I can't be imagining this.


"What's this one?" I ask, picking up a hefty tome with a plain black cover.


Bastien comes closer, a playful smile on his face. "Well, if you're so eager to know, why don't you take a look?"


"It's quite the hefty one," he adds. 


The book's thickness intrigues me, but Bastien's flirting even more so. I decide to tease him back. "You know," I say, glancing up from the book, "I'm starting to think you're just trying to keep my hands busy so I don't touch anything expensive."


Bastien laughs, taking a step closer. "Maybe I'm just keeping you occupied until the rain stops."


"Here's one I like," he says, handing me a title that I can't understand by an author named Georges Bataille.


"'Georges Bataille,'" I read, "You're into Georges Bataille?"


He smiles and takes half a step closer, our chests nearly touching now, and reaches for the book. "Do you want to know what I'm into, Leo?" he asks in a low voice, his breath tickling my ear.


My eyes dart up to meet his, feeling the heat rise in my cheeks. "Maybe I do," I reply, my voice stronger than I intended.


"Do you know Georges Bataille?"


"No, I don't," I answer.


"He was French," he begins, "and among other things he and I have in common, he believed that extreme pleasure and extreme pain, despite seeming like opposites, are actually the same."


"Did he now?" my breath was lower and quieter.


Bastien’s gaze sharpens as he watches me absorb his words. The way his lips curl into a sly smile makes my pulse quicken. “Would you like to see the cellar?” he asks, tilting his head slightly. “I have more down there that I think you’d find interesting.”


I raise an eyebrow, curiosity piquing my interest. “Sure,” I reply, feeling a rush of excitement. 


He steps back, gesturing for me to follow him down to the first floor and towards the back of the store. The door creaks open, revealing a narrow staircase leading down into darkness. My heart beats faster as we descend, the air cool and tinged with the scent of old paper.


Once at the bottom, Bastien turns to lock the door at the bottom of the stairs with a soft click that echoes in the stillness of the cellar. He flips on a couple of rudimentary lights overhead, casting a dim glow over stacks of boxes and shelves filled with dusty books. 


“Customers aren’t usually allowed down here,” he says, looking around as if ensuring we’re alone. The atmosphere feels intimate, charged even. 


I take in my surroundings before turning back to him, my mind racing with possibilities. “So,” I say slowly, meeting his gaze again, “did you bring me down here to put Georges Bataille’s theory to the test?”


A grin spreads across his face as he steps closer to me. His face sparks with mischief.


“Ah, so you are smarter than most Americans,” he replies with a playful smirk.


Without hesitation, Bastien reaches for the hem of his shirt and pulls it over his head in one smooth motion. His skin glistens under the harsh light – a blend of slight muscle and softness that calls out to be touched. I admire how his floral tattoo wraps around his bicep and how it contrasts with his stubble.


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“Damn,” I murmur under my breath as I take in the sight before me.


Bastien stands there confidently, unabashedly exposed and awaiting my response like an invitation to explore uncharted territory.


Bastien's bare torso pulls my gaze like a magnet. I can’t resist the urge to show him what I’ve got. I pull off my shirt in a fluid motion, letting it drop to the floor. His eyes widen as they travel over my physique, drinking in every curve and contour.


“Wow,” he breathes, a genuine look of admiration on his face. “Can I touch?”


I nod, heart racing as he steps closer. The heat radiating from his torso as he nears me sends a shiver down my back.


Bastien reaches out tentatively at first, fingertips grazing my shoulder before trailing down my bicep. He stops, his eyes flickering up to mine for confirmation. I smile, “Go on.”


He digs his fingers into my muscle with a light grip, exploring the firm definition of my arm. “You’re really strong,” he murmurs, his voice low and awestruck. “Can you flex for me?”


With a soft grin, I comply and flex my bicep, feeling it harden beneath his touch. The way he studies me makes the air thick with tension.


“Wow,” he whispers again, tracing the curve of my muscle as if he's charting an unfamiliar territory. “And now… relax.”


I let the tension fade, feeling him gently press into the softening flesh. He seems mesmerized by the contrast – hard and soft – his fingers lingering over every ridge and valley of muscle.


“You’re like a science experiment,” Bastien remarks playfully, stepping back to get a better view while running his hands along my abs next.


“Is that so?” I chuckle, enjoying this unexpected intimacy between us.


He nods vigorously, biting his lip as if he's trying to contain himself. “You have these amazing lines here,” he says, gliding his fingers along the ridges of my stomach like he's memorizing each groove.


“Flex again,” he commands softly.


I oblige once more, feeling my muscles tighten under his eager hands as they press harder into my skin. He’s so focused on what he's doing that it feels almost sacred – like I'm giving him something more than just flesh; I'm offering up parts of myself that are rarely shared with him.


“You feel incredible,” he says with pure wonder in his voice as if discovering a treasure trove hidden beneath layers of skin.


Bastien glances up at me again with those inquisitive eyes. "I could do this the whole night," he says with a hint of mischief lacing his words before returning to run his fingers over me once more.


"I'll let you do this all night," I smirk, enjoying how his fingers trace every ridge and valley of my muscles.


My heart pounds against my ribs as Bastien continues his exploration. The way he touches me – reverent yet hungry – sends a charge through me. His fascination with the contrast between my flexed and relaxed muscles is driving me wild.


I can't help but wonder if he's into more than just touching. My mind races with possibilities, imagining his fist connecting with my stomach, the sweet ache of a punch delivered just right. Or maybe he'd prefer to be on the receiving end – his slim frame could probably take a solid hit, and the thought of watching his face contort in that perfect blend of pain and pleasure makes my cock twitch in my jeans.


Would he be into it? God, I hope so. 


I've been craving a good gutpunching session since I landed in Paris. The way he mentioned Bataille's theory about pleasure and pain being the same thing wasn't just intellectual banter – it was practically an invitation.


His fingers press harder against my abdomen, and I deliberately relax my muscles all at once, letting his fingers feely sink deeply into my guts so he could feel how soft they can be when not tensed.


"Ah – sorry," he seemed startled, glacing up at my face and then back at my stomach.


Say something, Leo. Test the waters.


Bastien's eyes glance back up to meet mine, and I see something there – a hint of the same hunger I feel. Maybe he's thinking about it too. Maybe he wants to feel what it's like to have his fist sink deep into my gut, or to have me work over his stomach until he's gasping for breath.


The anticipation is killing me. I need to know if we're on the same page, if this connection goes beyond simple muscle worship into something more primal, more intense.


"I think Bataille was onto something," I say. I stretch my arms out to my sides, opening my body completely to him – vulnerable, inviting. "The line between pleasure and pain... it's thin."


Bastien's eyes widen slightly, his gaze traveling from my face down to my exposed torso and back again.


"I mean it," I continue, holding his gaze. "You can do whatever you want to me."


The words hang in the air between us, heavy with implication. Bastien swallows hard, his Adam's apple bobbing in his throat. His fingers, which had been exploring my muscles with such reverence, now hover uncertainly over my abdomen.


"Whatever I want?" he whispers, his voice cracking slightly.


I nod, not breaking eye contact. "Whatever you want."


Bastien's breath quickens, and I watch as his pupils appear to dilate. He licks his lips, suddenly looking parched.


"I—" he starts, then stops, seeming to gather his courage. "I want to hit you. Right here." His fingers press lightly against my stomach, right below my sternum.


My cock begins to stiffen within my briefs instantly at his words.


Fuck yeah. This is exactly what I've been craving.


"Please," I breathe, my voice dropping to a desperate whisper. "Please hit me, Bastien. I want to feel your fist in my gut."


His gaze levels back on my stomach, and I can see his own arousal beginning to strain against his pants.


"You're sure?" he asks, his voice thick with want.


"I'm begging you," I reply, relaxing my abs, offering him the softest target possible. His eyes dart back to my belly as he feels my muscle disappear from under his hand, feeling my gut bulge out as it relaxes. "Hit me. Hard."


Bastien rises from his crouched position. The dim light of the cellar casts shadows across his face, highlighting the sharp angles of his cheekbones and the hunger behind his eyes. He steps closer, closing the distance between us until I can feel the heat radiating from his bare chest onto mine.


Without warning, his hand slides around to the back of my head, fingers threading through my hair. He pulls me toward him with surprising strength, and for a moment, I think he's going to kiss me. Our lips hover just inches apart, his breath warm against my face.


"I'll hit you," he whispers, his voice husky, "if you promise to hit me afterward."


His eyes search mine, looking for any sign of hesitation or disgust. He finds none.


"Deal," I breathe, unable to wait any longer.


I close that final inch between us, capturing his lips with mine. The kiss is hard, desperate, and hungry. His mouth is warm and tastes faintly of cigarettes. I grip his waist, pulling him flush against me, feeling the press of his erection against mine through our pants.


When I finally pull away, we're both breathing heavily. His pupils are blown wide, lips slightly swollen from the intensity of our kiss.


"I will," I tell him, my voice low and certain. "I'll beat that stomach until you can't breathe. Maybe longer."


A visible shudder runs through him at my words, and the corner of his mouth quirks up in a smile.


"Good," he whispers. "That's exactly what I want."


Bastien takes a step back, his fingers curling into a tight fist. The anticipation makes my heart race, my stomach muscles instinctively relaxing for the blow. 

His left hand grips my shoulder firmly, steadying me, while his right arm cocks back.


"Ready?" he whispers, eyes locked with mine.


I nod, ensuring my abs have gone completely soft. "Do it."


His fist rockets forward, driving deep into the pit of my stomach with shocking force. The impact is brutal – far more violent than I expected from his slim frame. His knuckles tear through my relaxed abdomen like they're searching for my spine, crushing everything in their path.


"UH—," I wheeze, doubling over as the air evacuates my lungs in one violent rush.


My intestines feel like they're being rearranged, writhing as they absorb the blow. The sensation is overwhelming – a sickening churn deep in my guts as they compress against my spine. I can feel my organs squirming, protesting the intrusion as they're flattened by his knuckles.


The pain blooms outward from the impact point, radiating through my entire core. My bowels clench and spasm, the force of his punch sending waves of pressure through to my lower abdomen. It feels like he's reached inside me and grabbed a fistful of my insides, squeezing and twisting them into knots.


My legs weaken, but I manage to stay upright, one hand braced against a nearby shelf. The initial shock gives way to pleasure so intense it borders on religious.


"Fuck, Bastien," I gasp, struggling to refill my lungs. "You punch like a fucking boxer."


There's a flush spreading across his chest as he asks if he can punch me again.


"God yes," I pant, the words barely audible as I struggle to refill my lungs. "Keep going. Don't stop until you're ready for me to work you over."


A devilish smirk spreads across Bastien's face. "Georges Bataille mustn't have known just how right he was," he murmurs, stepping closer.


He guides me backward until my spine presses against a slice of wall between two tall bookshelves. His hands find my abdomen, thumbs digging curiously into my softened belly. The pressure sends pleasure radiating through my core as he explores the softened muscle.


"Fuuuck," I moan as his thumbs press deeper, manipulating my intestines through the soft wall of my abs. It feels like he's playing with my insides, shifting and kneading them beneath my skin. The sensation is invasive, intimate in a way that makes my cock throb painfully against my zipper.


Bastien's eyes never leave my gut as he works his thumbs in circular motions, mapping the terrain of my unprotected belly. Then, without warning, he pulls back his right fist and drives it deep into my solar plexus.


The punch is deliberate, calculated. His knuckles burrow into my belly like they're trying to reach my spine. I feel my organs compress, flattening against the wall of muscle behind them. Instead of withdrawing immediately, he grinds his fist in a slow circle, crushing my intestines against each other in a nauseating swirl of pressure.


"Oh god," I gasp, the words barely escaping as my diaphragm spasms. My bowels feel like they're being stirred, churning under his merciless knuckles.


When he finally withdraws, I barely have time to gulp a shallow breath before his fist plunges into my lower belly. This time, I feel my guts part around his knuckles like soft clay, my intestines squirming as they're displaced by the intrusion. He twists his fist slightly, grinding against the tender loops of my bowels, sending a wave of electric sensation into my groin.


Each impact is a brilliant sensation. My eager insides feel rearranged, organs shifting and sliding against each other as they absorb the brutal force. When his fist connects with my navel, I swear I can feel my intestines flatten into my body, squeezing together in a sickening crush before rebounding. The pressure builds with each blow, my lower gut distending each time his fist plows into my bowels, shuffling my intestines around my core.


Bastien's face transforms with a predatory grin as he watches me struggle to catch my breath. There's something almost academic in his expression – like he's conducting an experiment on my body and cataloging every reaction.


"You can take more," he decides, not a question but a statement of fact.


Before I can respond, his fist drives into my gut again, knuckles disappearing into the soft flesh below my ribs. I feel my intestines compress violently, squishing into me. 


"Hnnngh," I groan, the sound barely human as my lungs empty in one violent rush.


He follows with another punch, this one landing lower, right above my navel. The impact sends a shockwave through my bowels. Each blow feels like it's reaching deeper than the last, his fist tunneling through the thick layer of slackened muscle to plow into my vulnerable organs.


"Your stomach feels amazing," Bastien murmurs, his French accent thick, and adding to my own arousal. "So soft when it's relaxed. I can feel everything moving inside you."


His next punch digs even deeper, his knuckles seemingly disappearing into my abdomen. The pressure against my intestines is unbearable, my guts feeling like they're being kneaded like dough. My cock throbs painfully against my jeans with each new explosion.


Suddenly, Bastien's hand darts down, grabbing my groin with unexpected force.


"Fuck!" I yelp as his fingers accidentally catch my balls, sending a bolt of sharp pain shooting up through my belly.


Before I can recover, his fist hammers into my lower gut, just above where his other hand still grips my crotch. The dual assault – the lingering ache in my balls combined with the brutal compression of my lower intestines – nearly buckles my knees. My vision swims as pleasure and pain blur into one overwhelming sensation, and I grip both hands to Bastien’s shoulders.


Bastien's knuckles sink deeper, twisting into my lower gut with agonizing precision. My bowels squirm against the intrusion as he grinds his fist in a slow, deliberate circle. The pressure is relentless – like he's trying to memorize the topography of my insides through his knuckles. I drop my hands from his shoulders and lean back against the wall. 


Bastien's hand releases my groin only to grab my jaw forcefully, fingers digging into my cheeks as he forces me to look him in the eyes. His face is inches from mine, pupils dilated with arousal, a thin sheen of sweat making his skin glow in the dim light.


"Do you want it to hurt more?" he asks, his voice low and dangerous. "Do you want real pain?"


Despite the throbbing ache already radiating through my entire gut, despite the way my insides feel scrambled and my lungs still struggle for air, I hear myself answering without hesitation.


"Yes," I rasp. "Make it hurt."


Something dangerous flickers behind Bastien's expression, and he smiles in a way that promises beautiful agony.


"I have an idea," he says softly.


Bastien's eyes scan the room with predatory focus, finally settling on something on the shelf behind me.


"Perfect," he murmurs. "Turn around."


I follow his gaze to a thick wooden cylinder  – a pedestal, maybe? – about six inches in diameter and about a foot in length, that appears to be part of some old display. Bastien retrieves it, testing its strength with his hands.


"Put this behind your back," he commands, his voice firm but gentle. "Horizontal."


I take the wooden pedestal, feeling its solid weight. Without questioning, I position it horizontally across the small of my back, just above my ass.


"Now lean back over it," Bastien instructs. "Arch your back."


I do as I'm told, bending backward until my spine curves over the wooden cylinder. The position forces my thick chest up and out while my stomach stretches taut, then relaxes as my abs naturally slacken in this vulnerable pose. My arms hang at my sides as I offer my exposed belly to him.


Bastien approaches slowly, his eyes fixed on my arched abdomen. His hand reaches out, fingers splayed as they make contact with my stomach. The touch is reverent at first, almost tender as he traces the contours of my relaxed muscles.


"This position," he whispers, pressing gently against my navel, "it opens everything up." His fingers walk down my abdomen, pressing incrementally deeper with each step. "Your intestines have nowhere to hide now."


His palm flattens against my belly, pushing in with steady pressure until I feel my organs shift beneath his hand. My bowels squirm erotically as he kneads my abdomen, his fingers sinking into the unprotected flesh.


"I can feel them moving," he says, his voice deep. "Your guts are so soft, so vulnerable like this." He leans closer, his breath hot against my ear. "I want you to feel everything, Leo. Every sensation. I want the pain to become pleasure until you can't tell the difference anymore."


His hand presses harder, fingers digging into the yielding muscle of my stomach. My intestines shift beneath his touch.


"Bataille would be proud," I murmur as Bastien traces circles around my navel. 


"Your body understands what his philosophy only described," he smiles. His palm pushes deeper, manipulating my innards through the wall of soft muscle.


Sweat beads on my forehead as Bastien plays with my arched belly. The bookstore cellar is getting warmer.


Bastien notices the glistening moisture on my skin. He steps closer, grabbing my right arm with unexpected force. He lifts it high, exposing my armpit, and buries his face in the hollow. I feel his nose press against the damp hair there, hear him inhale deeply, drawing my scent into his lungs.


"Putain," he groans, muffled against my skin. He takes another deep breath. "You smell fucking incredible, Leo."


He backs up slightly, eyes glazed with lust. "You're so hot like this," he whispers, his accent thickening. "Stretched out for me. Sweating. Waiting for the next punch."


Without warning, he drops into a slight crouch and rockets upward, his fist driving in a vicious uppercut that buries itself deep in my lower belly. The impact is devastating – his knuckles plowing through the soft, unprotected flesh below my navel like a wrecking ball through tissue paper. 


"HUNGH!" The sound that escapes me is fully involuntary and practically inhuman.


The sound of the punch is a deep THUD. I feel my intestines flatten instantly against his knuckles, compressed violently between his fist and my spine. The loops of my bowels squish together, smashing against each other as his fist compacts them. 


The pain is exquisite – pure, clarifying, perfect. My cock throbs as my insides continue to squirm and resettle around his knuckles. The impact reverberates through my entire abdomen, my guts feeling liquid and unstable as they absorb the force.


Ughhh…” I moan, the incredible pain in my lower bowels lingering. 


Bastien's fingers dance over my exposed belly, his touch erotic and threatening. He presses his knuckles against my navel, not quite punching – just testing the softness, feeling how my unflexed abs yield beneath his touch.


"So vulnerable here," he murmurs, his accent causing my cock to stir as his knuckles sink deeper into my navel. "The center of everything."


His eyes lock with mine as he applies more pressure, his knuckles disappearing into the small depression. I feel my intestines compress beneath the force, squelching euphorically as his knuckles press deeper into my body.


"Do it," I whisper, my voice strained. "Stop teasing."


A sadistic smile spreads across his face. "As you wish."


His fist hammers straight into my navel with shocking force. My tout belly caves inward – to the extent that it can, stretched taut as it is – accepting his fist without any resistance.


"Uh!" I grunt, the pain overwhelming me.


Before I can recover, he delivers another punch to the same spot, his knuckles slamming against my insides again. I feel my aching guts squish as the pain radiates through my bowels, the helpless guts rearranging themselves around his plowing fist.


"Your six pack," Bastien observes as he pulls his fist back. "It's still visible even when soft." His fingers trace the subtle ridges of my relaxed abs. "So beautiful how they bounce back after each punch."


He shifts his stance slightly, dropping lower. The next punch comes from below – a vicious uppercut that plows into my lower belly – the solid THUD of his fist flattening my lower bowels echoing through the cellar.


"Uh! Fuuuck," I wheeze.


"Look at that," he murmurs, watching my abdomen recover from the blow. "The way your belly reinflates after I punch it... like your entrails are breathing." His eyes are hungry, fixated on the subtle movement of my stomach. "And that little jiggle when everything settles back into place – mon dieu, that's hot."


Another uppercut drives into my lower guts. This time, Bastien grinds his knuckles in, his fist buried in my bowels.


"So soft, so vulnerable. I could rearrange everything inside you if I wanted."


Oh, fuck… oh, fuck…” I whimper. “Do it. Do whatever you want to my insides.”


Bastien returns his attention to my navel. His fist presses into my navel with slow, deliberate pressure. I feel his fist displacing my guts like he's reshaping clay. My lower belly bulges slightly outward as my innards have nowhere else to go but down.


"Perfect," he whispers, admiring his handiwork.


With his other hand cocked back, he locks eyes with me. I barely have time to register his intent before his second fist hammers into the distended mound of my lower gut. The impact is catastrophic – his knuckles plowing through the already displaced intestines, crushing them against his other fist still buried in my navel.


"UGH!" I cry out, something between a shout and a sob.


When he finally withdraws both fists, my guts slosh back into place with a sickening internal gurgle that I swear I can hear. The relief is momentary but intense – my intestines uncoiling and seeking their natural positions, creating aftershocks of sensation that ripple through my abdomen.


Bastien takes a confident step backward, a satisfied smirk playing across his lips as he watches me struggle to regain my composure and my breath. His chest rises and falls with heavy breaths, sweat glistening on his forehead and pecs.


"Your turn," he says, his voice husky with desire. "I want to feel what you feel."


I reach back and grab the wooden pedestal from behind my back, placing it carefully on the shelf. My body immediately doubles over, hands braced on my knees as I let my abused gut hang freely. Each breath sends waves of delicious pain radiating through my core. My intestines feel scrambled, rearranged by Bastien's relentless fists. I close my eyes for a moment, savoring the deep ache that pulses through my guts.


"Fuck," I whisper, one hand gently cradling my tender stomach. The skin feels hot to the touch, sensitized from the brutal workout.


After a few deep breaths, I straighten back up. Bastien watches me with hungry eyes, his chest still heaving. I step toward him deliberately, closing the distance between us. Our bodies connect – sweaty chest against sweaty chest – and I feel the heat radiating between us. His skin slides against mine, slick with perspiration, as I wrap my arms around him.


I crush my mouth against his, tasting him. My tongue pushes past his lips, claiming him with the same brutal intensity he showed my gut. When I finally break the kiss, I keep him close, my lips brushing against the shell of his ear.


"Now I'm going to rearrange your insides," I whisper, my voice low and dangerous. "I'm going to punch so deep into your guts you'll feel your intestines in your chest."


A visible shudder runs through Bastien's body. He moves backward until his spine meets the wall, exactly where I stood earlier. His hands trail down his own torso, fingers splayed across his slim belly. The muscles beneath are visible but relaxed – soft targets for what's coming.


"Hurt me, Leo," he says. "Make me feel what you felt. Make it worse."


I press my fist against Bastien's navel, feeling the softness beneath my knuckles. His stomach yields easily, a stark contrast to the firm muscle visible when he's tensed. I circle his navel slowly with my fist, applying just enough pressure to make him feel it without causing pain yet.


"Mmmh," I murmur, watching his face as I trace these concentric circles around his belly button. "So soft."


Bastien's eyes are half-lidded, his breathing shallow as my knuckles sink slightly deeper with each rotation. 


"I want you to punch the breath out of me," he says, voice barely above a whisper. "I want to feel empty, like there's nothing inside me but your fist."


My cock throbs at his words. I ease back slightly, my fist still resting against his stomach.


"Tell me what you like," I say. 


Bastien's eyes meet mine. "The solar plexus," he answers without hesitation. "Right here." He taps two fingers against the soft spot just below his sternum. "Hard uppercuts that make me feel like my diaphragm is being crushed."


He continues, "I love when a punch knocks all the air out at once. That moment when you can't breathe, when your lungs seize and your body forgets how to function – that's when I feel most alive."


He guides my fist lower, positioning it just below. "And here, deep in the pit of my stomach. I want to feel your knuckles grinding against my spine through my entrails."


His hand drops to his lower belly. "But not here, not yet. Save this for later, when I'm already broken."


My pulse quickens as Bastien's words sink in. The raw honesty in his request – the vulnerability of telling me exactly where he wants to be hurt.


"That's fucking hot," I murmur, trailing my fingertips across the soft spot below his sternum. 


I press my thumb gently against the hollow beneath his ribcage, watching his reaction carefully. His skin dimples under the pressure, yielding to my touch. Bastien's breath catches, his eyes fluttering closed as I increase the pressure incrementally.


"This spot right here?" I ask, circling the sensitive area with my knuckles. "So responsive."


"Oui," he breathes. 


I form a loose fist and place it against his solar plexus, applying slow, deliberate pressure. The flesh gives way easily, his unflexed muscles offering no resistance as my knuckles sink deeper. Bastien moans, a sound that vibrates through his chest and into my fist.


"More," he urges, voice strained.


I comply, leaning my weight forward gradually. My knuckles disappear into his body, pressing past the initial resistance until I feel something firm beneath – his diaphragm tensing involuntarily against the intrusion. Bastien's breathing becomes shallow, his body working around the obstruction I'm creating.


"Nngh," he groans, head tilting back against the wall. "Don't stop."


I push harder, feeling his insides compress around my fist. There's a certain threshold where I can't press any deeper. My knuckles are buried completely in his solar plexus now, his body seemingly swallowing my fist.


Bastien's face transforms with a mix of agony and ecstasy. His lips part, eyes glazed with pleasure as I hold the pressure steady. His stomach muscles spasm around my buried fist, his body simultaneously fighting and welcoming the invasion.


"Perfect," he whispers, the word barely audible as his diaphragm struggles against my knuckles. "C'est parfait."


I pull my fist back from Bastien's solar plexus suddenly, creating a vacuum that forces him to reflexively suck in air. His body responds automatically, his diaphragm expanding to fill the void my fist left behind. As he gasps that desperate breath, I drop my shoulder slightly and drive my fist forward with devastating precision.


My knuckles slam into the exact same spot, but with ten times the force. The impact is brutal – a sickening thud as my fist disappears into the soft hollow beneath his ribcage. I feel his diaphragm collapse instantly, his solar plexus caving around my knuckles as they tunnel deep into his core.


UH—” a grunt is forced from him; not his voice, though. Just the sound of air forced unexpectedly through his throat. 


Bastien's body folds around my fist, his organs compressing violently as my knuckles plow through the unflexed flesh. The sensation against my hand is incredible – his stomach wall is but a soft, pliable mass of his innards. I can feel his intestines shifting beneath my knuckles, squishing aside as I press deeper. His guts feel like warm putty reshaped by my fist, yielding and resilient at the same time.


His legs buckle immediately, and he collapses forward into my arms. I catch him easily, my fist still buried in his gut, grinding deeper as his weight falls against me. The added pressure of his body drives my knuckles further into his stomach, and I feel his insides churning around my hand – his intestines twisting and flattening into his body.


"Oh bordel… merci," he gasps once he manages to inhale enough to form words, the words barely audible as he struggles to find more air. His face presses against my shoulder, his entire body trembling. "Putain…putain…"


His insides are warm against my knuckles. I can feel his organs pulsing around my fist, his intestines squirming as they try to recover from the brutal compression. Every subtle movement of my hand creates new sensations – his bowels sliding against each other, trapped against my fist.


His breath comes in shallow, desperate gasps against my shoulder, hot and moist on my skin. The smell of his sweat fills my nostrils – earthy and masculine – as his body processes the exquisite pain I've delivered.


I pull my fist back from Bastien's solar plexus, watching as he sags against me and moans deeply. Using both my large palms, I straighten him back up, pressing him gently but firmly against the wall. His trim, tough body is slick with sweat.


Bastien cradles his belly with both hands, his fingers splayed protectively across his abdomen. His breathing has steadied somewhat, but his eyes still hold that glazed, distant look of someone riding the edge between pain and pleasure.


"Mon dieu," he whispers. "It's been years since someone hit my guts like that." He takes a deeper breath, wincing slightly as his diaphragm expands. "The last time was with this Dutch tourist. He had these massive hands, like yours."


Bastien's fingers trace small circles on his own stomach as he speaks. "My favorite part was when he pinned me against his hotel room door and just hit my belly until my legs gave out. I slid down the door, and he followed me to the floor, punching the whole way down." A dreamy smile crosses his face. "I came without either of us touching my cock."


I smirk, brushing my thumb across my lower lip. "If you move your hands out of the way," I tell him, my voice low and rough, "I'll give you a better beating than that Dutch guy."


Without hesitation, he drops his hands to his sides, revealing his gut to me again. I watch, fascinated, as his abdominal muscles visibly relax – the subtle definition of his slim torso softening, becoming more vulnerable in an instant.


"Bon garçon," I murmur, appreciating the deliberate way he's making himself defenseless for me. "Sois un bon petit cible et reste là."


Bastien's expression shifts from blissful anticipation to confusion. His brow furrows slightly as he processes what I just said.


"I thought you didn't speak French?" he asks, his voice still breathless from the previous punch.


I smirk, watching his guard drop even further as his mind tries to reconcile this new information. The distraction is perfect.


"I made an effort to learn the important things," I reply.


Without giving him time to process my answer, I drive my fist straight into his solar plexus. My knuckles tunnel deep into the soft hollow beneath his ribcage, burrowing past the initial resistance until I feel his diaphragm collapse around my fist. His warm upper intestines compress against my knuckles, squishing aside as I grind deeper.


"UH—" The sound that escapes him is primal – halfway between a grunt and a gasp as all the air evacuates his lungs in one violent rush.


I hold my fist there for a moment, savoring the sensation of his guts around my knuckles. His body folds forward, doubling over my embedded fist. His forehead drops to my shoulder once again as he struggles to inhale.


Slowly, I withdraw my fist, allowing his body to fold further forward as he instinctively tries to protect his wounded core. The moment his solar plexus is exposed again – his torso bent at nearly ninety degrees – I launch a vicious uppercut.


My fist rockets upward, devastating the exact same spot. The impact lifts him slightly off his feet, his intestines flattening against his spine as my knuckles plow through the unprotected flesh. His diaphragm spasms violently around my fist, his lungs emptying once more in rapid succession.


"Ugh!" The sound is barely audible – more vibration than actual voice as his body convulses around my buried fist.


I shove Bastien back against the wall, my hands gripping his shoulders with bruising force. His head knocks against the plaster, but his eyes never leave mine – glazed with pain and arousal. He makes no move to protect himself. His arms hang limp at his sides, his gut completely exposed and vulnerable.


"That's it," I growl, admiring the way he offers himself to me. "Keep those hands down."


I form a tight fist and position it just below his solar plexus, pressing gently against the soft flesh. The spot where his upper abdominals meet his lower ribs – a perfect target. His stomach yields under my knuckles, warm and pliant.


I pull back and drive my fist forward into the young shopkeeper. The impact sends a shock through my arm as my knuckles vanish into his gut. The sensation is incredible – his intestines part around my fist like warm butter, compressing and shifting as I tunnel deeper. I can feel his organs sliding against each other, displaced by the violent drilling of my fist.


"Fuck," I whisper, twisting my wrist slightly to grind against something firm – maybe one of his organs. Whatever it is, it squishes beneath my knuckles, creating a slippery resistance with his intestines that drives both of us wild.


I withdraw and immediately hammer another punch into the same spot. This time, I feel the coils of his bowels spreading outward from the impact point like ripples in a pond. The wet, organic sensation of his innards yielding to my fist nearly makes me cum.


Another punch – deeper this time. My knuckles press through layers of tissue until I swear I can feel the hard surface of his vertebrae. His intestines squirm between my fist and his spine, crushed into a pulpy mass that slides wetly around my fist as Bastien’s eyes begin to roll back.


Each impact reveals new textures inside him – the rubbery resistance of his abdominal wall, the slick coils of his small intestine, the firmer mass of other organs shifting slightly with each blow to his upper gut. His insides are a complex landscape that my fist explores with brutal curiosity.


Bastien's eyes continue to roll back, his face contorted in pure ecstasy. Between desperate gasps for air, he manages broken phrases that make my cock throb harder.


"C'est... incroyable," he groans. "Your fists... they're perfect..."


I pull back and drive another punch straight into his solar plexus. His body folds forward instantly, collapsing against my chest. His forehead slamming against my pecs, his hot breath panting against my skin.


"Please," he gasps against my chest, his voice raw and desperate. "Punch me until I cum... I can finish without touching myself."


I grab his chin, tilting his face up to meet mine. His eyes are glazed as he pants. But something below his face catches my attention. His lower belly, previously flat and trim, has started to bulge outward. The repeated trauma to his gut has maybe forced his intestines downward, creating a slight distension below his navel. His abdominals have completely surrendered, offering no resistance to the shifting of his bowels.


Without a word, I wrap my left arm around his head, pulling him into a tight headlock. His face presses into my armpit, his nose buried in the damp hair there. His reaction is immediate – a deep inhale followed by a moan of appreciation.


"Oui... your smell..." he mumbles into my pit, his tongue lapping at the salt on my skin.


I form a tight fist with my right hand, positioning it beneath the slight bulge of his lower belly. The flesh here feels different – softer, more yielding, like a water balloon filled just shy of bursting.


I drive an uppercut into the distended flesh. My knuckles sink deep, parting the layers of skin and muscle as I feel the pillowy softness of his lower intestines. They slither against my knuckles.


Bastien grunts into my armpit, his hot breath dampening my skin further. I feel his tongue press against me, tasting my sweat as I deliver another uppercut to his bowels.


This time, I feel something different – the thick mass of his bladder? His colon? Something shifts against the thinner coils of his small intestine as he moans in abject bliss. The contrast in texture is incredible, like punching through layers of different densities. His organs compress against each other, creating pockets of resistance that collapse under the pressure of my fist.


Each uppercut forces a grunt from Bastien's throat, the vibrations traveling through my armpit and across my chest. I feel his lower gut gradually softening further, his intestines becoming more pliable with each brutal impact. My knuckles sink deeper with each punch, his bowels offering less resistance as they're pulverized.


Suddenly, Bastien's entire body goes rigid. A strangled cry escapes his throat as his hips buck forward involuntarily. I feel wetness spreading across the front of his pants as he cums untouched, his cock emptying itself from the sheer brutality of my assault on his guts.


Bastien collapses against me, his entire body shuddering in waves as his orgasm crashes through him. His fingers dig into my biceps, desperate for stability while his legs threaten to give out completely. I hold him steady, watching his face transform with pleasure – eyes squeezed shut, mouth open in a silent cry.


"Fuck," I whisper, admiring how completely he's surrendered to the sensation.


After several moments, his breathing steadies. He looks up at me, a lazy smile spreading across his face.


"Let me return the favor," he says as he catches his breath, his voice hoarse. "I want to make you cum now."


I raise an eyebrow and smirk. "You better."


In one fluid motion, Bastien pushes off from me and spins us around, backing me against the wall. The reversal sends a jolt of excitement through me. His slim frame suddenly feels powerful as he presses his palms against my chest, pinning me in place.


He drops to his knees in front of me, nimble fingers working my belt loose. The leather slides through the loops with a soft hiss. He unbuttons my fly, tugging my jeans and briefs down just enough to free my cock.


"Mon dieu," he murmurs appreciatively as my erection springs forward.


His mouth engulfs me without hesitation, warm and wet. The sensation pulls a groan from deep in my chest. His tongue swirls around the head of my cock with practiced skill.


Just as I'm settling into the rhythm of his mouth, his fist drives into my lower belly without warning. My unflexed abdomen offers no resistance – his knuckles plunge deep, tunneling through the soft wall of my slackened abs and into my guts.


The pain explodes outward from the impact point. I feel his fist create a hollow in my abdomen, plowing into my bowels.


"Fuck—" I gasp, the word punched out of me.


Bastien doesn't relent. His mouth works my cock while his fist hammers upward again, catching me just below the navel. This time, I feel the loops of my intestines flatten beneath his knuckles as they're crushed.


Each punch reconfigures my insides – intestines twisting and folding over themselves. The pressure builds with nowhere to go, my guts churning in response to the assault. His knuckles find new depths with each impact, pressing into territories within me that he hadn't reached before.


My cock throbs harder with each blow, the pain in my gut a white-hot pleasure. Bastien times his punches perfectly – driving his fist upward just as his mouth descends on my shaft. The dual sensations merge into something transcendent.


When his next punch lands, I feel something give way deep inside – not tearing, but giving in completely. My lower intestines squeeze below his knuckles like dough, offering no resistance as he presses deeper than before. The violation of my bowels' innermost depths sends me over the edge.


I cum hard down his throat. Bastien swallows every drop, his fist still embedded in my belly, grinding against my pulverized intestines as I empty myself into his mouth.


My only thought now is, will he want to accompany me back to my hotel?

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dough NUT
Apr 17

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